New Poem
>> Thursday, May 28, 2009
I wrote a new poem today and was hoping for some feedback, I don't know if I like the title. I do like to keep my poems short with a lot left to interpret.
Temptation
Darkness and Despair
I crave
Flesh and Flames
I lust
Betrayed and Beaten
I fall
Abandoned and Alone
I cry
Deserted and Desperate
I die
I have been toying with a few more lines but they don't seem to work.
